Revisions

    After my film was viewed by my peers to give us feedback, it became very apparent there was a massive oversight by our group. We had an outside party use a camera and get our footage. This is a problem that has to be number on our list of things to do in order to better our film as this could be grounds for it being ungraded. Thankfully the only part that was filmed by an outsider was the segment where my partner and I were on screen together. I foresee this being an easy fix. I am very thankful for the peer review as this could have been disastrous.
    Secondly, The editing has to be smoother or the acting requiring better performances. We had lots of mistakes in forgetting lines or not liking how something was said so we had a lot of clips to cut to together I feel as this lead to an overwhelming sense of of being thrown in a washing machine and our peers agreed. My hope is that since the anxieties of editing a project as big as thing one or acting are out and we both have experience this should be a walk in the park for the revision.
   The production value could have been better as well and after now knowing what we need this can be adjusted to our benefit. Lastly, the credits at the end of the film will be showed throughout the film in what most likely will be the lower third of the screen.