Revision #1

The first revision was made to the run time. The run time was at around 40 seconds over the limit so we cut out scenes that did not really match the feel of the movie or did not clarify Svetlana's status of a vampire. For example, Peer review made it overwhelming clear that "Cafe Baci" scene was lost on the viewers as the they could not make the clear connection that Svetlana's avoidance of an Italian restaurant indicated an aversion of garlic which is a typical vampire trope. Also and most vitally we cut out portions of the film that were filmed not by our group and left portions we filmed or used the tripod for. This will allow our film not to be invalidated.

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